A poem about not saying positive things about yourself.
I really like this it’s funny we can get all the live and validation in the world but if the guy in the mirror shows no respect it is hard
Yep yep!
I really like those thoughts… just one place I might suggest….
A screen burdened by an empty screen, Make it…
A screen burdened by an empty dream.
I really think it brings it deeper meaning and wow,
Just wow
Yeah that was definitely my intention to make it "dream." Thanks for pointing that out!
Very vulnerable piece. Thanks for sharing, Hazel.
Thank you!
good reminder to be kind to ourselves!
Relating to this so much! That last bit hits hard.
"So before work necessitates my attention,
I draw close to the chair and sit before
A screen burdened by an empty screen,
Waiting an easing of words slowly typed.
But as the seconds linger onward,
I find myself running through doubt–
Leaving any praise in the dust,
Becoming a wasted attempt to uncover
Exactly what I never say, or ever will.
That I’m proud of who I am."
Excellent.
I fixed this line right here:
Should've said "dream" at the end.
I'm so glad you like that part of the poem!
So cute lived this piece
I really like this it’s funny we can get all the live and validation in the world but if the guy in the mirror shows no respect it is hard
Yep yep!
I really like those thoughts… just one place I might suggest….
A screen burdened by an empty screen, Make it…
A screen burdened by an empty dream.
I really think it brings it deeper meaning and wow,
Just wow
Yeah that was definitely my intention to make it "dream." Thanks for pointing that out!
Very vulnerable piece. Thanks for sharing, Hazel.
Thank you!
good reminder to be kind to ourselves!
Relating to this so much! That last bit hits hard.
"So before work necessitates my attention,
I draw close to the chair and sit before
A screen burdened by an empty screen,
Waiting an easing of words slowly typed.
But as the seconds linger onward,
I find myself running through doubt–
Leaving any praise in the dust,
Becoming a wasted attempt to uncover
Exactly what I never say, or ever will.
That I’m proud of who I am."
Excellent.
I fixed this line right here:
A screen burdened by an empty screen,
Should've said "dream" at the end.
I'm so glad you like that part of the poem!
So cute lived this piece