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Todd Christopher Thurman's avatar

from the poem I most like those things I can only discuss inside. And strangely and funny enough, I actually far prefer your preamble more than the poetic itself. Weird, huh?

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Hazel's avatar

Yeah I feel like I put a lot into the preamble this time. Normally I don't have much energy for that.

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V. Walker | Poet's avatar

“Even if I’m unsure if I’ll ever love myself fully again. But, I promise I’m trying.”

What a vulnerable but beautiful piece 🫶 the last two lines are 🤧 wow just wow. Got me bawling

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Hazel's avatar

*hands you a box of tissues* sorry man, glad you liked it haha

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DIANA ADMIRE's avatar

Wow this part I had to read it again!....

And weighted by a sadness

I only dare discuss inside

The lines of my own stanzas, just so reflextive...and profound.

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W. Lorenzo Cromwell's avatar

Love "I have seen this before". You drew me into the image. Thank you.

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